The Wrong Season – Part 2

To understand this post, first read the explanation of the prompt here (if you don’t know the basic idea already) and then read ‘The Wrong Season’ (part 1) here, written by Mrs. Green at Well, I never… Then read on below:

Then, too late, she saw the glint in his eye.
“Half a kilo? Coming right up, madam.”
She struggled to keep a straight face.
“Mister Jarvis… If YOU have ME on a string ONCE more…”
It was hopeless to pretend, though. She knew it.
She loved it. He knew it.

Advertisements
This entry was posted in 100 Word Challenge and tagged . Bookmark the permalink.

9 Responses to The Wrong Season – Part 2

  1. Alison Green says:

    Love it – a little bit of humour, and maybe an old romance.

  2. Love this! When I read part one I was expecting ranting and disappointment – but this is fun and could there be love among the sausages? (one small typo – knew x2)

  3. This is lovely; humour, romance. Will it continue…

  4. Pingback: 50/50 word assignment – WEEK 24 (ENDINGS) | Welcome to the Ventahl Theatre

  5. jfb57 says:

    No mincing with emotions there Phil! Get take on Alison’s starter. Brill!

  6. snagglewordz says:

    Really like this, especially as I was expecting something that would evoke sadness as opposed to humour! Nice cadence to the piece as well, a great match to part one. I particularly like the last three sentences.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s